By far, this was the most difficult assignment I have ever received. Funny thing is, I thought it would be easy. I learned that I use far too many uneccessary words that can be eliminated entirely.
After working for three hours, this is what I came up with.
Awful, yes I know, but it's all I could create.
Tweeted Poem:
It’s Fall
Today, I’m dancing and flipping.
Forever, I will be hydroplaning.
I thank God with glee.
It doesn’t get any better.
You’ll learn from childhood memories, in and out
swerving, back and forth.
So, just love already!
Forget hate, and
Return love.
Just Breathe.
So shoes on,
left sometimes tripping.
Alive,
Minute died,
Sold,
I saw the last stars.
People kid,
How about the need to ever live?
The lanes to home,
a month ago,
almost first, but than twice,
open,
was the almost, greatest miss
between Fall’s place that is fun darkness.
Put tonight’s scary thing away,
A leaf was just to be loved.
Unused Words:
it
in
the
this
this
is
Tweets used:
Childhood home sold about a month ago-already it's so different. I miss that place but the memories will live forever.
Flipping back and forth from Dancing with the Stars and Glee-it doesn't get any better than this.
Forgot how fun it was to be a kid. Love this.
Just saw Fall's first leave fall!
Almost died today-twice! Between hydroplaning and people swerving lanes last minute. Thank God, I'm alive.
I hate tripping on shoes left out in the open! Put your shoes away!
"The greatest thing youll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return."
Sometimes
After working for three hours, this is what I came up with.
Awful, yes I know, but it's all I could create.
Tweeted Poem:
It’s Fall
Today, I’m dancing and flipping.
Forever, I will be hydroplaning.
I thank God with glee.
It doesn’t get any better.
You’ll learn from childhood memories, in and out
swerving, back and forth.
So, just love already!
Forget hate, and
Return love.
Just Breathe.
So shoes on,
left sometimes tripping.
Alive,
Minute died,
Sold,
I saw the last stars.
People kid,
How about the need to ever live?
The lanes to home,
a month ago,
almost first, but than twice,
open,
was the almost, greatest miss
between Fall’s place that is fun darkness.
Put tonight’s scary thing away,
A leaf was just to be loved.
Unused Words:
it
in
the
this
this
is
Tweets used:
Childhood home sold about a month ago-already it's so different. I miss that place but the memories will live forever.
Flipping back and forth from Dancing with the Stars and Glee-it doesn't get any better than this.
Forgot how fun it was to be a kid. Love this.
Just saw Fall's first leave fall!
Almost died today-twice! Between hydroplaning and people swerving lanes last minute. Thank God, I'm alive.
I hate tripping on shoes left out in the open! Put your shoes away!
"The greatest thing youll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return."
Sometimes